Good effort
Obviously a lot of work went into this, so it deserves props for that. The humour was decent too - quite snappy. Unfortunately things got a bit confusing and over-complicated with the quick flash backs/cuts to different scenes and jokes. To be honest, it kinda ruined the flow of the piece and lost my interest. Some of the joke cuts also came across a bit sluggish, although flash isn't always the easiest medium to do punchy cuts coz of the playback differentiation on machines. Still a v good effort tho.